Friday, May 29, 2020

The Sun God Comments

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Blue Sky! !
White clouds!
Lovely day,
Very hot! ! ! !
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Heat! ! Exposure, Nakedness, Mankind on earth. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Nakedness! ! In the eyes of the people.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2020

Sun God knows what is right and what is wrong. Sun God motivates life giving temperature. Sun motivates humanity giving us energy and light. This poem is excellently and brilliantly penned.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2020

High Temperatures! Sweating, Muse of the heat on mankind; The Sun God in action! ! Able to control the daughters of Hillel......wonderful expression

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