Wednesday, May 31, 2006

The Sun Dosent Shine Comments

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No sun ever shines for me.
All I have is deep black clouds.
The sun is hidden somewhere.
Hidden along way not be found.
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Amy Kerswell
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Sophia White 31 May 2006

Hey, I agree with Ronald. The sun may not be shining right now - but it's there. Maybe you're just looking in the wrong places. Smile, because there's always tomorrow.

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Ronald Stroman 31 May 2006

look deep within yourself.. and rediscover yourself. i'm hopin' one day yourpoems will begin to smile... a little sunshine. on days, i'm not feelin' tooo good. help me out. write me poem filled with sunshine. a poet should be able to write about a lot of things. help me out.

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