Saturday, February 15, 2014

The Sun Bird... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a fire bird, fly with my flocks, not the same,
In Elliptical circle float to the visibility of heavens,
Sizzling in my mind can boil everything around,
The warmth in my heart may whisper to blooms,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 February 2014

Float In elliptical orbit to the visibility of heavens. Sun nicely described as a fire bird. Beautiful poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 16 February 2014

vivid poetic expressions of the mind defying all odds of captivity!

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