Sunday, January 4, 2009

The Sun And The Wheat Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I drive through the country
I feel as though I am running
My fingers through the wheat grass
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Samuel Stuart Pennell
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Adeline Foster 05 March 2013

Very good nature poem. You will like mine - Hand Haying - Adeline

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Louis Rams 31 May 2009

we are like the wheat growing in the field and when the sun touches us we begin to heal.

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Serenity Prayer 11 February 2009

short but very good. and thanks for your comment. good job on this one.

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Lovely in thought and delivery....

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 January 2009

miracle of God always.........loved the way you penned t....sebastine

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Alice Preece 14 January 2009

Woah. It's short but...perfect! Where's the fault? !

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Antonio Liao 13 January 2009

as you read it...it is a poem that talk about the miracle of God, all that can be see, is just a beginning of the great power of God...recommended that this poem should be read in the school...Thank you God bless..Its a wonderful poem i ever read...

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Jose Murguia 09 January 2009

short but just right ure words are written perfectly thank you for sharing a 10!

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Arik Carpenter 08 January 2009

long or short you descriptions are amazing

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Oscar Cantu 08 January 2009

great short poem. good job!

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Rita Shay 04 January 2009

Oh Samuel although your last two are short and two the point, give more. What you have is a concept, a wonderful, fascinating concept. Finish them!

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