The Sun And The Clouds Comments

a very beautiful write about sun, cloud and the Mood of the poetess.

When the clouds Patched the sky dark I am inclined To paint the world With gray.----Beautiful expression of your mood through this lovely poem.

Beautiful poetic expression. Your closing stanza line brought a smile. Nice write 10+

I feel the intense power of your feelings....Most of the time/I see the clouds/Behind the sun/And my days/Are like the sunflowers! A beautiful poem..................................10

I see the clouds Behind the sun And my days Are like the sunflowers... seeing sunflowers everywhere even in the dark thinking of the bright sun is a powerful imagination my dear poetess. you have that power of imagination..... Make use of it to write wonderful poems. tony

We feel easy or boredom as per the state of mind. Here this poem indicates such in this poem. We may cite... Most of the time/ I see the clouds / Behind the sun / And my days / Are like the sunflowers. This is a poem absolutely beautiful.

Our mood is usually focused on the weather forecast of that day, but it is influenced by the reality of how the weather will be on that day. We cannot deny that our mood is depending on the weather of that day. I love how you used such mesmerizing metaphors to express your emotive feel. How gorgeous feel to read your third stanza, brilliant Mrs. Juan-Austin! I have enjoyed a very lot your fascinating poem. A 10++++++++++for the vote

When the clouds Patched the sky dark I am inclined To paint the world With gray.........nice imagery. A beautiful poem shared hauntingly. Thanks for sharing.

And my days Are like the sunflowers. always looking for the sun, a lovely poem.

And my days Are like the sunflowers. Always looking for the sun, a beautiful poem.

I am again drawn to this poem. On my second reading I loved it more. A beautiful piece Rose.

Well, that's a truly beautiful poem describing the connection between weather and the human mood! Fascinating!

I love nature poems and hence automatically attracted by the title. Very true Rose, nature does affect our mood. I enjoyed this :)

'The Sun And The Clouds' is an elegant piece of poetry! Your poetic imagination has wonderfully sailed through the clouds touching the height of the sun.... A fabulous poem Rose......10

Sunshine! ! ! With the warm rays of the sun. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Great poem, Fresh feelings come from it.