Tuesday, November 10, 2020

The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun makes me believe

That Incredible events are ahead after a dull night
Hang on to observe the beams of expectation
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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2021

Through this poem I can visualise the incredible events that your poetic eyes capture. A short and beautiful poem.... appreciated!

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2020

Spilling through your window.........brilliant......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2020

Beautiful poem. Loved the image... “””beams of expectation Spilling through your window”, exuding hope, love, expectation... Great poem..

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2020

Inspiring, sometimes self inspiration is really required to keep going.5**

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Rajnish Manga 11 November 2020

Thanks for the poem as well as the Poet's Notes. So very thoughtful.

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Rajnish Manga 11 November 2020

What a beautiful poem of positivity and hope. It is the right kind of mindset that keeps us on the right track and leads us to a golden dawn of success in life. Thanks a lot.

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Varsha M 10 November 2020

Very true words. Very insightful words. Thank-you.

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