Monday, January 1, 2018

The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Throw all your hardships, to the wind
And follow the shade of the moon
for anytime there comes a dawn
And roll those blinds from your face
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Kevin Patrick
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Mj Lemon 02 January 2018

I had to read this several times. This is terrific, Kevin. I keep going back to the metaphor of the sunrise as metaphor for rebirth or a new start, or a new opportunity. There's a great undercurrent of optimism that makes this an exceptional work.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 January 2018

Kevin, such an inspiring poem...10+++

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