Tuesday, September 24, 2013

The Sun.... Comments

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The hot afternoon sun,
Just above the heads shines,
The shadows are gone,
Buried under the feet,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 October 2013

the life is a cycle, but not for human I missed reading your poems for past couple of weeks when I was away on vacation. I note how many beautiful poems I missed. I will make up for the lapse. Thank you for your poems full of meaning.

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Lyn Paul 26 September 2013

Lovely to read. We must stand up and fight. No matter

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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Best describes life towing in hardship, we must survive amidst all difficulties!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 September 2013

The shadows are gone, Buried under the feet superb ink, there, Veeraiyah, a great poem.

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