Friday, March 15, 2013

The Sun Comments

Rating: 4.7

It entered through the window
And bounced up off the floor
It bounced around the room
And bounced off all the doors.
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Gordon Jackson
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Beverly Scofield 19 April 2013

I like the solid simplicity of your poetry, Gordon. And I'm so glad to see your alive and kicking when I checked to see the date of your last postings. (smile)

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Dave Walker 15 March 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Valerie Dohren 15 March 2013

Great poem about the sun - enjoyed reading.

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Gordon Jackson

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Troy, New York
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