Tuesday, June 29, 2021

The Summer Wind And The Grass - Tanka Comments

Rating: 4.6

Each and every wand
Of green grass sweetly dances
With the summer breeze
As easily as my hair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 July 2021

Elegant and lovely!

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Spell binding imagination that deserves top stars

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And the wind that breezes through the hair.

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I love the dance of the green grass. Marvellous Tanka

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2021

To my Favourites this gem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2021

this Tanka can be re-read many more times and the reader will enjoy the most! Always concise and constantly beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2021

Every word of this great Tanka keeps me spellbound, there is so much appeal in this gem of a Tanka, definitely 5 stars full on top! I enjoyed it very much and

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Sandra Feldman 01 July 2021

Peace, love and beauty, Written with such talented and unforgettable ease.

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M Asim Nehal 30 June 2021

WOW, So well written. I can feel the wind passing my hairs.5*****

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Anjandev Roy 29 June 2021

As easily as my hair.....delightful...

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Varsha M 29 June 2021

And I can feel each wand of green grass playing with my hairs and saying embrace nature is yours and only yours. Grace not by trace but with abundance that blesses. Beautiful composition Rose.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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