Each and every wand
Of green grass sweetly dances
With the summer breeze
As easily as my hair
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I love the dance of the green grass. Marvellous Tanka
this Tanka can be re-read many more times and the reader will enjoy the most! Always concise and constantly beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing.
Every word of this great Tanka keeps me spellbound, there is so much appeal in this gem of a Tanka, definitely 5 stars full on top! I enjoyed it very much and
Peace, love and beauty, Written with such talented and unforgettable ease.
WOW, So well written. I can feel the wind passing my hairs.5*****
And I can feel each wand of green grass playing with my hairs and saying embrace nature is yours and only yours. Grace not by trace but with abundance that blesses. Beautiful composition Rose.
Elegant and lovely!