Summer rain
From the early hours onto this rain
Summer still awaits to the shower
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You're poems Dr Kar are very good indeed. Another nice poem Louie
Tears of joy like summer raindrops Forever the desire, to be drenched Sorrows melted away in flow Relief struck human soul Dares to dream into a flower valley. Enjoyed this read. Thank you.
Dr Subhendu, one always expects fine stuff from you but this one is magic. thanks.
across the summer’s rain of fear sorrow yet allays to the sea. -------------- It is beautiful - fresh like a prime innocence -
Summer Rain...what a clever poem you have for the narrow minded who doesnt understand the hopes of the dreamers...
The final stanza is HUGE! Perhaps that last line should read 'into the depth not yet accomplished...' Love the line - 'let me close my eyes imbecile', the image of weak-minded eyes failing to assist faster dreaming is classic. Rgds, Ivan
It's a very beautiful poem, but I don't understand the meaning of one word...I'm talking about 'imbecile'... what is the meaning of this word in this line? Please explain - English isn't my first language and sometimes I get confused... I know one meaning, but it really doesn't make any snse when you use it here...
The sun gets befuddled by the outcry of rain in the summer. An imaginative mind acquires imbecility at the sudden spill over of darkness due to overcast sky and goes into slumber.Your poems are so soothing, as if they always lay a deep layer of balm over the mind.