Sunday, March 16, 2008

The Summer Of Sixty Eight Comments

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It wasn’t the summer of 69
It was the summer of 68
A levels
Leaving school
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David Keig
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SMARY 31 March 2018

If you're English you definitely need to get rid of the AMERICAN accent. But, I could also interchange through TO destinations. with 'Two' destinations. Also, A MAJOR correction, it wasn't said who was still sitting near the kids playground, you or him? A NOTE: any sort of nurse, let alone a psych nurse, is NOT of no achievement, especially when someone is weak of wits& at their standing up for us. He may have been observing humans & their behaviour. Not everyone's meant to go to Uni.

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SMARY 31 March 2018

Not as bad as the former about 'The Abos', theStolengeneration! You really DO need to stop an American accent reading out your poems.Summer of '68 I reckon should read 'through 2different destinations.What do you think? How can you say he didn't want to succeed? ! It's Very effective being any sort of nurse.Now, to the Stolen Generation, It definitely didn't happen that way, it definitely didn't.

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Alison Smith 20 March 2008

Strange the way the world spins us in and out of time.

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