Friday, February 23, 2018

The Summer Before High School...[ Short; Dedicated To P H Poet, "Fog Runner' ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fog Runner went streaking on the football field;
I mean he was running naked. He did NOT yield...
to the referee's blasts from the ref's whistle.
But what DID stop FR's run was a BIG damn thistle..
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Bri Edwards
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2018

Archimedes rushed into the public without clothes (naked) ... “Eureka! Eureka! I mean he was running naked...is it eureka that resembles Archimedes' story of getting something wonderful.....! I strongly believe your friend will come out with flying colors with a befitting end to his epic novel! All the best! (10)

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Fog Runner 24 March 2018

Appreciate your faith and comments, Dr Dillip! They are more appreciated than you might expect, good neighbor! Plus the analogy seems accurate. haha

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Loke Kok Yee 08 March 2018

Bri, For sure some will be titillated by the sight Although the 'dangling' may have the others in fright Thanks Bri '

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Fog Runner 10 March 2018

Hard to argue with such nude logic, but I promise to stay dressed in public from now on :)

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Valsa George 06 March 2018

I feel sorry for him! Is he still on the tracks dangling his wounded......? I am sure your friend will somehow reach successful to the finishing point and achieve his target! All the Best to him!

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Fog Runner 10 March 2018

All the best to you, too, ma'am. And thank you! - healing is underway plus I think I'm wearing clothes again.

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Fog Runner 23 February 2018

I am actually immortalized in a rhyme? You rock, Bri - no wonder people revere you around here. Only thing I question is the idea that any hypothetical dangling of mine was horrible to see. haha Keep on writing poems, sir. We will keep on reading c:

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