if it is about rain
the case you want to raise
suffice it to whisper ‘water' to my ear
chanting about the ocean or hurricane unneeded
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'and the dry cracked land waiting for the wet descends' - the poem ends with this beautiful depiction. Liked it. Welcome to PoemHunter, poet Aj Anwar!
Thank you Poet Khairul Ahsan for your comment and greeting. Yes I am new in PH, and so far I feel at home.
A fantastic expression has been made on nature and rain. Most lines are touching and haunting. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10
God speaks through the nature we can listen to God and respond. When we respond to the beauty of nature we respond to God. Rains add music to the song of nature.
Very well put dear friend, very true. Our words are only so minuscule in the effort to interpret nature.
whisper ‘water' to my ear chanting about the ocean or hurricane unneeded let alone the wrath of heaven for it would probably speak to me more if you call on the yearning heart.. a very fine poem bringing in spiritual notes when the poet cogitates on the rain and the tempest....... tha nk u dear poet. tony
A good start with a nice poem, AJ Anwar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Thank you dear Jazib Kamalvi. I did read your piece, very nice and thorough.
if it is about rain/the case you want to raise/suffice it to whisper ‘water' to my ear...fabulous poetic expression! An elegant piece of poetry! (10)
Thank you so much Dr Dillip K Swan. I am very pleased that you like this poem.