Monday, July 9, 2018

The Summary Of Rain Comments

Rating: 4.4

if it is about rain
the case you want to raise
suffice it to whisper ‘water' to my ear
chanting about the ocean or hurricane unneeded
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Aj Anwar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2018

if it is about rain/the case you want to raise/suffice it to whisper ‘water' to my ear...fabulous poetic expression! An elegant piece of poetry! (10)

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Aj Anwar 13 August 2018

Thank you so much Dr Dillip K Swan. I am very pleased that you like this poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2018

'and the dry cracked land waiting for the wet descends' - the poem ends with this beautiful depiction. Liked it. Welcome to PoemHunter, poet Aj Anwar!

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Aj Anwar 13 August 2018

Thank you Poet Khairul Ahsan for your comment and greeting. Yes I am new in PH, and so far I feel at home.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

A fantastic expression has been made on nature and rain. Most lines are touching and haunting. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Aj Anwar 12 August 2018

Thank you so much dear friend. Nature is always fascinating, endlessly.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2018

God speaks through the nature we can listen to God and respond. When we respond to the beauty of nature we respond to God. Rains add music to the song of nature.

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Aj Anwar 12 August 2018

Very well put dear friend, very true. Our words are only so minuscule in the effort to interpret nature.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2018

whisper ‘water' to my ear chanting about the ocean or hurricane unneeded let alone the wrath of heaven for it would probably speak to me more if you call on the yearning heart.. a very fine poem bringing in spiritual notes when the poet cogitates on the rain and the tempest....... tha nk u dear poet. tony

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Aj Anwar 06 August 2018

Thank you, sir, it's very kind of you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, AJ Anwar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Aj Anwar 09 July 2018

Thank you dear Jazib Kamalvi. I did read your piece, very nice and thorough.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 July 2018

AJ, such a fine free verse....10++++

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Aj Anwar 09 July 2018

Thank you so much dear Bernard, my greeting from Jakarta.

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