The Suitcase Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

The Suitcase

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After a day long work
you are pretty successful
Your suitcase is
full of wealth and
costly jewellery.

My little pocket
is full of nothingness.
When we rich the river bank
please never ask me
to carry yours
as I can swim across
the river
with one too heavy.
Can you?

Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhakti Sharma 22 October 2018

Interesting poem dear poet.Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. There is much difference in between poor and rich. Dear Binoy, you have astutely inscribet this.....let it be quoted........ Your suitcase is full of wealth and costly jewellery. My little pocket is full of nothingness. Beautiful poem shared.10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 04 December 2017

Thanks sir for your nice inspirational comments.I need your blessings sir. Binaya

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