Friday, November 13, 2015

The Suit Case Is Empty Comments

Rating: 4.8

The suit case is empty
Baggage unloaded
Carried this load
On this road
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Lyn Paul
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Bri Edwards 19 October 2018

sinkers can be stinkers! ! to MyPoemList. i seem to have not done it last time around. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2016

i guess NIgel missed soemthin' the first time around....which was fairly obvious. Congratulations to whomever this poem is about! bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2016

Carried so long! ! But, there is hope ahead. Thanks for sharing.

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Nigel Norton 07 December 2015

I liked it, I may be wrong but here in the UK baggage can sometimes mean getting rid of a bad marriage or simply children off to Uni now. I will have to read it again for some clues... NN

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Kavya . 24 November 2015

lovely poem and yes, we all would like to live our life without burden, without baggage on our shoulders...nicely related to a suitcase, a weightless load

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Jak Black 18 November 2015

A lovely poem Lyn. Can't remember freedom myself, but it sounds great. Release me from the shackles and chain, Let me be myself again.

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Paul Brookes 13 November 2015

I agree and great poem

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Rahman Henry 13 November 2015

Excellently presented poem. A profound one.

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Nicely penned poem, I liked the metaphor Suit case which we all carry in this life and unable to offload it, this burden is must to keep walking.....Loved it, thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem............10

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Nicely penned poem, I liked the metaphor Suit case which we all carry in this life and unable to offload it, this burden is must to keep walking.....Loved it, thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Carrying the load with empty baggage to reduce tension on journey of life in wise and interesting road is very fantastic seems to be humorous to present many things in one fold. Carrying heavy load by hand is also a common practice in life. Although freedom is a simple word still it has deepness and this makes us realize life very well. Interesting poem shared definitely...10

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