Monday, October 2, 2006

The Sugar House Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sugar house is shutting down,
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Chuck Audette 21 November 2007

Seems like a years worth of images in very few lines, starting with the sugar house (in the spring, if it is running) . Nice rhymes. -chuck

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Esther Leclerc 02 October 2006

Mike, for a sweet lady, this... Yes, welcome back! Esther

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Scarlett Treat 02 October 2006

This is Scarlett, the squirrel, who was busy storing up the beautiful fall days, because I felt winter approaching..Thank you dearest Mike for this lovely 'nut' to put in my basket. It will definately go in MY treasure box. Charming, absolutely charming. I am Honored....Thanks, friend! !

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Marilyn Shepperson 02 October 2006

Made me think of the cafe on the prom here; If it didn't shut in winter, the sea would be inside. Great poem Marilyn

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Poetry Hound 02 October 2006

Nice and rhythmic. Stong opening line. Not sure if the poem is symbolic of something else, but it's nice as a straightforward poem. Welcome back, Mike.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 02 October 2006

dear mike, i like the impressive line; winter wants its solitude.

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