Thursday, October 14, 2004

The Sucky Poem Dedicated To My Goth Side Comments

Rating: 3.3

don't be afraid, baby
just slip out of your skin
wander in
enjoy the air on your bones;
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valerie jaeger
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Gary Scott Gebert 21 October 2004

Very interesting piece. I liked how you invite the read by exposing themselves and enjoying the air. Alot of imagery in this. Gary

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Maria Davids 14 October 2004

you are a very sweet person. i don't believe that ya have a goth side, but i think ya have a unique freshness and hope your friend appreciate the kindness in your heart.

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