Sunday, March 25, 2018

The Successful Ovarian Egg Comments

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Title: The Successful Ovarian Egg
I find a sock on the floor and look for another underneath the pillow
Both belong to my son who is a dear fellow but funny in his ways
I thank the stars that despite his teenaged ways, he is mellow
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Gayathri Seetharam
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Unnikrishnan E S 11 April 2018

Hi Gayathri, Another wonderful poem. True to the heart. The first thing I noticed about your poems is that, they flow naturally from your heart and so, directly simply communicates with the reader. Great going! _unnikrishnan

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Carl Roussell 25 March 2018

This is a really good write, especially the last three lines.

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