Tuesday, August 11, 2020

The Substance Of My Silence Comments

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It's not the voice of Silence
That draws me closer
To the heart of existence
It's the purity of Silence
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Kenneth Maswabi 12 August 2020

Dear Susan Williams, i am most humbled by your comments on my poem " The substance of Silence." May the beauty of poetry give us a renewed hope in this difficult times. Thank you.

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Susan Williams 12 August 2020

Those last lines are anything but silent! ! ! They speak to the heart of man. 10+ and onto my fav list

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Susan Williams 12 August 2020

Inside the leaf of existence It's possible That I am the chlorophyll And Silence is the Light Together we are the fabric That focuses life onto the beacon of hope

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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