The Stuff Of My Dreams Comments

Nice beginning and good descriptions that really resonate with the reader throughout. Perfect morning, blissful memory, blazing sun, beautiful yet saddening. My fav. line is: You were a blazing sun Warming every inch of me. I can relate to this line so well being on the island. That is the best feeling in the world. Every inch. A perfectly warm, comfortable feeling. Hard to find, but worth seeking. I lived this one too, lol. Thanks for sharing.

This is delicious. Descriptive and beautiful and amazing. You get your point across without many lines but the lines you do use are powerful enough to leave a lasting picture.