The Struggles Of Life. Comments

theres a builder and a baker watching the morning news they have to work a job they hate the one they even got to choose and the school boy hes a wondering about what his daddy said “how can I be better than the rest” Is what the poor boy said I loved these two para's, wonderfully written. Expectation, greed, abandonement, hate... many emotions packed in this poem, justly.

A urban epic. Indeed... everyone must walk on with life.. Thanks for writing.