Friday, June 6, 2008

The Struggle Of Nature.................... Comments

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Earth has not had a bath
As there is not enough water
For rains
She has stayed ugly for years now
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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
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Joseph Daly 06 June 2008

Christ, this is miserable. But I like it. The metaphor of the bath is a good one and you use it to maximum effect. I don't go along with the expressed sentiment of the poem, but it reads really well and that is what counts.

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