Christ, this is miserable. But I like it.
The metaphor of the bath is a good one and you use it to maximum effect. I don't go along with the expressed sentiment of the poem, but it reads really well and that is what counts.
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Christ, this is miserable. But I like it. The metaphor of the bath is a good one and you use it to maximum effect. I don't go along with the expressed sentiment of the poem, but it reads really well and that is what counts.