The Struggle Of Life Comments

Life remains always a dreamy- eyed fairy tale That never is found to be happy with no reason behind the show off. Slowly and silently the sun is slopping beneath the line

In the struggle of life is Subdued my soul, The spirit that never did fight to live. The dark dense cloud to thunderstorms

You've captured the beauty and the turbulence of life.

Nicely crafted and beautifully articulated poem. Sometimes, the road is uneven and bumpy. Still, we have to manoeuvre things to get the right balance in life. Thanks for sharing. The spirit that never did fight to live. The dark ethereal dream never did chase The harmonious song of life.... a dreamy- eyed fairy tale