Friday, July 17, 2009
The Struggle Comments
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Pressing the breast plate against my chest,
Double-checking the helmet is over my head
The adrenaline racing through my veins,
Knowing this fight will be the last.
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Keith Hendrickson
17 July 2009
very nice job. 'my weakness becomes my strength' thisline works so well with the concept of this piece. very very nice work
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7/22/2025 7:17:33 PM # 1.0.0
All I can say I loved how you wrote this poem amazing wording I think...and I agree with Keith that line 'my weekness becomes my strength'...because sometimes weakness does slowly become ur strength another good one! ! ~ESPN CHICK