Saturday, December 10, 2011

The Strength Comments

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Tears may wash away the dirt from the eyes
and the hurt from the heart.
Fear will wipe away the courage from the heart,
and fill the eyes with tears.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2015

I have just read your first poem posted on this site, it's so wonderful! The poem is short, but makes a strong statement. To strengthen our heart, we must do away with both tears and fears. Well said!

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Valsa George 07 July 2012

Brevity is the soul of wit.... this is indeed a beautiful epigram! !

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Gajanan Mishra 08 March 2012

Very good poem. Thanks Subbulakshami.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2012

Giveup the fear and tear. Fine line. Very good. Yours Gajananmishra

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Pankajam K 07 March 2012

A good composition. True revelation.

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Kee Thampi 19 December 2011

fear is a scorpion Fear is worse than tears, as it hurts the heart, Tear is better than fear, as it heals the wound,

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Vipins Puthooran 10 December 2011

Excellent poetic depiction/wonderful poem! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 10 December 2011

Excellent poetic depiction/wonderful poem! ! !

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