Friday, May 29, 2009

The Strength Of The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

'See my power', the sea shouted to man,
'I can crush houses, as well as buildings as flat as a pan'.
Man argued, you can destroy a lot of lives,
But the rest of us have protected ourselves with pitchforks and knives'.
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Sneha Murali
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interesting the conversation between man and sea..you did it well

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Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

Sneha dear... i think this one is best of your rich poems..love it very much..and i really enjoyed alot and read 5 time... well done.. really great one..the style is unique and perfectly done... all my respect to you good poetess...10 ++++

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

TSunami was terrible...i don't even want to remember it... a lesson learnt... good one

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