look at all the pains and cries
look at all the people shot and dead
No child can walk throuh the streets
As you walk your heart misses a beat,
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This included a bit of philosophy, so I gave it an 8. It is very important to say something or be entertaining if people are going to take the time to read what you write. GW62
That is a very true poem....Good work on it. ~A Little Blue Bird~
if it must be, let it be...I always say that when ppl don't listen to the truth. but I really liked this line: 'Where you'll end up you'll never know.'