The Streets Hurts Poem by Andres Gonzalez

Andres Gonzalez

Andres Gonzalez

Metropolitan December 24,1992. at 12: 00 a.m

The Streets Hurts

Rating: 4.5


look at all the pains and cries
look at all the people shot and dead
No child can walk throuh the streets
As you walk your heart misses a beat,
All these gangs Let it go,
Where you'll end up you'll never know.
If you have trust you'll make it throuh
only if you learn to believe in you
you can't be blind to see
It's best if you let it be.

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DELETED NOW 18 July 2008

if it must be, let it be...I always say that when ppl don't listen to the truth. but I really liked this line: 'Where you'll end up you'll never know.'

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 July 2008

This included a bit of philosophy, so I gave it an 8. It is very important to say something or be entertaining if people are going to take the time to read what you write. GW62

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 10 May 2008

That is a very true poem....Good work on it. ~A Little Blue Bird~

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Andres Gonzalez

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Metropolitan December 24,1992. at 12: 00 a.m
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