Sunday, January 10, 2010

The Streets Comments

Rating: 4.5

Up at dawn,
but the day goes on.
Fighting for your life,
in sadness and in strife.
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Angel Jordan
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Vincent Feliciano 10 January 2010

good rythm, you and i have a similar style...

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Wayne Bowen 10 January 2010

Great poem. You may want to read NO HOPE. Wayne Bowen

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Romeo Della Valle 10 January 2010

Victim of streets' crime I fallen, here in New York City, but nevertheless, I have survived, guess it was not my day...Thank the Lord! This is a very well penned which shows to me that you got a great talent to keep moving on in life...Keep it up! you happen to be in the right track and site, PH,10+++ Love and Peace...(The One and Only) ...

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