Thursday, September 17, 2015

The Streets Comments

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I implore you to,
Open your eyes fool
And your ears too,
Your vigilance is crucial in these streets that seek to devour you.
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Baron von Savage
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Neran Sati 18 September 2015

Close to life and beautifull, thanks!

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Lunge Ndzimande 18 September 2015

Thank you

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Lunge Ndzimande 18 September 2015

Than you for, hope to read your work soon.

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Kelly Kurt 17 September 2015

Some streets are alive with violence, while others lead a life of serenity. Thanks for sharing, Lungelo

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Lunge Ndzimande 18 September 2015

I appreciate your feedback, and I hope to read your work soon.

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Miraj Raha 17 September 2015

Oh lovely, brilliant Ode.Yes the streets are always aware, makes me feel scary.

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Lunge Ndzimande 18 September 2015

Thank you for your comment! The streets are a very scary place, but nestled within all that chaos and danger, is hope...

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