The Street Life Comments

Raymond! Very vivid description of the street life of the poor and destitutes I like the line A man's life is threatened like a patient's body surrounded by nurses. Very powerful poetic expression.

Wickedness and evil portrayed in detail gives a sense of horror on the life on the streets....... in understandable words you are giving the reader a real picture of life. as topic you selected the words lifestyle. it was strange for me, but it conveys the attitudes...... thank you dear poet. tony