Monday, December 24, 2012

The Street Child Comments

Rating: 3.5

Wild feral eyes,
Looking for redemption from the skies.
Flailing grasping limbs,
Not avaricious in their sins.
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Hannah York
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Adeline Foster 10 January 2013

A wonderful description couched in verse. Feral is such a great choice of metaphor. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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