Monday, July 20, 2015

The Street Anthem. Comments

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Across this street,
There is one thing that catches the eye.
It is not the tarmacked roads that snakes down the hills
Neither the beautiful horizons drawn by the setting sun,
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DEDAN ONYANGO
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Roseann Shawiak 26 July 2015

Mtemi, you have a very unique and intense way of telling what you see in life, the wrongs that are being committed every day, the squalor everywhere because of the rules you have described so accurately. Breath-taking descriptions fill your poem with undeniable truths. Please continue writing about these atrocities, others will pick up and follow your lead! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Dedan Onyango 27 July 2015

Thank you very much for taking your time to read my poem, I will say your comments have inspired write even more on social inadequacies that characterises most if not all of African countries. I look for for a society where one wont be judged by their skin colour, tribe, political inclinations, race but by the content of their brains.(Martin Luther king junior) . Thank you once again Roseann.

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