Thursday, January 17, 2008

The Stream Comments

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The relaxation
As the water flows
The breeze in my hair
As the wind blows
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Brandi Lee
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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2008

Well composed poem, the imagery and the beautiful flow of expression speaks for itself in this fine write.10/10 Stay strong! ! Best wishes Jon

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