Saturday, September 13, 2014

The Straw Comments

Rating: 5.0

While serenading the silent breeze
With the burden of moon beams on my shoulders
Strange noises blinding the deaf within me,
The dark night chirping into me,
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Hardik Vaidya
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Roseann Shawiak 24 January 2016

Very calm and soothing poem, interesting and enticing imagery throughout it. Loved reading this poem, it slid across my mind like a puck on ice, leaving an indelible impression like that of snow before melting. Great poem, Hardik, enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Hardik Vaidya

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Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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