Sunday, May 3, 2009

The Stranger World In Cyberspace Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day i flew into cyberspace
A swarm of bees set my screen ablaze
I walked my way through the wonderland
A content heart, no one could understand
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Angelic(Annie) Female
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Kesav Easwaran 14 July 2009

good imaginative write...carefully formatted lines with sweet rhyming...thanks Annie...10

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Raj Nandy 05 June 2009

The poem is as lyrical and beautiful as your name! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

hey nice expressions indeed..The first line is very catchy...'The day i flew into cyberspace' hey didn't you found any meteorites in cyberspace? ...this is an interesting indeed.. nice..beautiful poem ..great poetic expressions..liked it best wishes with love shan

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Shweta Advani 03 May 2009

U rock buddy....keep up d gud work....: -)

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