Friday, April 29, 2011

The Stranger World In Cyberspace Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day i flew into cyberspace;
A swarm of bees set my screen ablaze;
I walked my way through the wonderland,
A content heart, no one could understand
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Sd Tiwari 16 August 2011

Nice poetry. World of cyberspace is virtual where one cannot land in reality. Well composed poem and good rhyme. I give 10 of 10 marks.

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Anshul Gupta 14 August 2011

I really appreciate the way you have told the reality of cyber world... Yes, we do need to get back to basics!

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Anshul Gupta 14 August 2011

I really appreciate the way you have told the reality of cyber world... Yes, we do need to get back to basics!

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