Tuesday, May 6, 2008

The Stranger's Lament Comments

Rating: 4.8

He saw your reflection
In the window as you passed.
He saw a smile,
But knew it was masked.
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Amanda Miller
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Joseph Cross 07 May 2008

Very interesting. a good explanation of the conflicts always paired with admiration.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 May 2008

they say don't talk to stranger.......but getting admiration from a total stranger is something to lament with............good job amanda.

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Michael Koelliker 06 May 2008

I enjoy the rhyme scheme and the emotions expressed. I have felt this way many times before. I love it. Much Clown Love Michael

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Amanda Miller

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