She wakens in the still of night
In need of much more sleep
The room is dark & quiet
But for a faint glow by her feet
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Yes.. your time with the master poet Sweetbird was well spent.. Sooooooo many young poetesses such as yourself would have given their all to have been in your place!
For me, the best poetry is the poetry that puts an image in my mind....this poem put a very vivid scene in mine, good job.