Sunday, April 22, 2012

The Stranger In The Mirror Comments

Rating: 5.0

I shut the outside world
And hide in my dungeons alone
With Conscience tinkering my head
And Fear gripping my heart
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shikha shah
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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 30 August 2012

Omg.. its a nice poem with a silence touch to the softest part of our image... verywell writren. Nice job dearly

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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

You can feel the passion in every line of this. It's intense and so beautiful. Please keep writing, this is amazing!

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Prakhar Sharma 18 June 2012

Beautifully expressed.

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Neela Nath Das 28 April 2012

Allegory.A person with conscience can kill the dark faces of sins.We should have conscience.The style of write is nice.

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Asif Andalib 27 April 2012

Dear Poet Sikha, your poem is great! But your conscience is so strong so why do you want to kill it? It will make you a perfect person by the grace of God Inshallah and only then you will find peace of mind! Thanks for sharing.

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