Wednesday, July 16, 2008

The Stranger In My Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met a man when I was sixteen.
He showed me that I could care.
It was the strangest thing I'd ever seen,
for I thought my heart and soul laid bare.
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Casualty of Chaos
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Rani Turton 18 July 2008

This poem, narrative, is very poignant and also filled with a later understanding of this couple's failure to remain together. Thanks.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 July 2008

'The sun shone through the leaves, Casting shadows on the lawn Following my love's death I became quiet and withdrawn A wonderful breeze whispered The darkest hour is just before the dawn When you miss your life's reason Be patient and serene as swan' touching poem....thanks for sharing

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