Monday, March 24, 2014

The Stranger In Me (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I delved into my depths to look for Me:
A reflection of a stranger greets me;
I stared into her empty eyes and soul,
Wondering, —is she me? —is she my whole?
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2018

Self introspection has been vividly portrayed. Whole poem is on self discovery with touching words. I mark two lines impressive especially..... Merged with the past, no present nor future on my sight, Memory's cord strangling my life, pulling tight, so tight; Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2018

How can I love myself completely, whole, alive, If half in darkness mind's eyes are leading me blind? .......very insightful and introspection expression! I appreciate the style of your penning.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

The mirror of awareness! ! Nice piece of work.

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