Thursday, December 10, 2020

The Stranger Comments

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She knew she wasn't the
first shy girl conned beneath
a scintillant moon.
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Khairul Ahsan 11 December 2020

Being tricked is of course worse than being simply 'lied to'. 'from first sight, she had longed for his carnal lips' - A good, poetic expression.

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Kostas Lagos 11 December 2020

Well, tricks and lies are part of the game too. A really good poem

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 December 2020

Unfortunately love is a game. You cant play it being lame. Despite this you have to fall in love all the same. Boys lie girls lie Adam lied Eve lied. Husbands lie wives lie. You just have to try to pry the lies sometimes you cry but when the right boy comes you will know. Good poem as usual. Down to earth and about real teens. Well done and lie back to them pesky boys.

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