Monday, June 12, 2017

The Stranger Comments

Rating: 4.8

Mystic were her eyes,
A beautiful hazel gaze.
Quiet and charming,
Yet so loud.
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Ankita Bhattacharjee
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Dear poet, I think the girl is yourself. you are writing the poem in the point of view of the boy. this is my guessing.it may be correct.

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Rajnish Manga 20 June 2017

A cute pair of dimples adorn her cheek, Dancing to the melody of her laughter. Though, there is no direct connection with a fellow commuter in a city but sometimes, he or she leave a lasting impression with appearance, speech or mannerism. Nice portrayal. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 June 2017

Her voice so melodious, It reaches deep into the heart. A cute pair of dimples adorn her cheek, Dancing to the melody of her laughter. Falling into love with a stranger a girl and her beauty and her fine dress. Loved this poem.. it is very melodious and naturally very poetic. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 June 2017

A tremendous imaginative work. Thanks

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Michael Hopkins 12 June 2017

Very nicely said. Should have said hello but sometimes we can't for whatever reason. I hope you meet her again.

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Thank you for the read! Yes, I could have said hello if she were for real. 😀😁

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