Monday, August 10, 2009

The Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

'What is wrong with me, ' I think as I stare at a
beauty from afar. Can you feel it as my eyes pierce
though your soul reavealing yourself to me. The intensity
of my eyes rise as you look up and your eyes meet
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Contessa Neal
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Ashley Davis 10 August 2009

wow very deep writing! loved it give it a 10! keep writing your very good! ! !

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

fine internal rhymes and diction...fine craft! ! ! Thanks........loved it!

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