Friday, May 18, 2007

The Stranger Comments

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Your Suicide Note really tore at my heart,
When I saw your picture and read what you said.
It effected me deeply and I could not sleep,
For thinking of you, not wanting you dead.
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David Barlow
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Tsira Goge 10 February 2008

Hello Devid... I do not hesitate to tell, Without tear could not read, thanks for such a poem and for the kind soul..... Tsira

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Marta Xoxx 22 October 2007

Awsome. Strong poem, I really like it.

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Linda Weischedel 17 August 2007

This is an amazingly STRONG write of a poem David. I had to read it twice. Not because of the subject manner, but because of the way you genuinely care for this 'Stranger' I like your style. Always, Linda

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David Harris 27 July 2007

David, I wrote a poem not long ago called A Stranger. Not the same as this and you sound like the stranger in that poem of mine. A person with an outstretched hand to help. Another wonderful penning from you. I beginning to like your style. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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David dfsg 22 July 2007

I myself have been witness to suicide and know how it really is such a sad, terrible thing and I think you’ve expressed it very accurately, Well written.

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Marci Made 09 June 2007

No one, absolutely no one have I ever seen show so much heart and concern for another.......Very admirable traits, especially when rarely seen in a man.....Your compassion in here may help more than just 'one' here, hold on! .....marci.xo

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David Barlow

David Barlow

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