The Stranger Comments

I love these poems that capture a scene you have experienced through your own eyes. Scenes are unfolding every second of every day and yours brought me into the scene with great skill. 10/10 Karin Anderson

A very nice poetic story written so well........fantastic theme! ! ! ...Thanks....10

a village belle she is and would be inqusitive about his origin...she would'nt have seen many a foreign...a very natural poem

the original sin...you ask it or not...you are sure to get it...10

Again a vivid Story of suspense.... An another well deserved 10 +++ Tracy

Biting suspense............will she ask or not................no she will not ask......Good Write

She won't ask, I guess. But she lives this moment joyously. She'll always remember him, and his smile. 10+