The Stranger Comments

Interesting approach with a surprise ending.

well written -midnightmaiden

haha! Superb anti-climax. Great technique for somebody so young.

This is a wonderful poem thank you for sharing.

lol, very amusing..good job

that was so adorable! ! ! nice lil poem; -)

Haha! thats kinda funny...i liked it...it has alot of tention (<-sorry...im a HORRIBLE speller) its like that 'good book' you wana hurry up and skip to the end so you can find out what happens...but then you wana keep reading where you left off cos you wana know what happens before that...like i said...i liked it...great poem...read mine sometime

Entertaining poem of the mind's tendency to worry.