The Strange Rainy Season Comments

thank you so much Captain for your guidance! ! I admit I have no knowledge of poem structures and types..i just write what comes to my mind....but I am on it now....will definitely incorporate your suggestions in all future work..cheers: -)

I liked the way you began the poem with the strange rainy season, titles are important to draw in the reader. Your structure is a little loose, tighten it up for maximum impact. A good technique is practice using the least amount of words, yet get your message across. Readers are sharp they fill in blanks quickly. Nice ending surreal, good touch.